e-mail Writing Workshop - Redrafted e-mail

Th redrafted email is 64 percent shorter and easier to read

StyleWriter's analysis of the original and redrafted email

The redrafted e-mail is 64 percent shorter, but contains the essential information the reader needs. Because we edited passive verbs, wordy phrases, acronyms and other style faults, StyleWriter rates the Style Index, the Average Sentence Length and the Passive Index as Excellent.

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